Thursday, September 5, 2013

We Start to Collaborate

India, me and Tamara


Karen:
     Tamara and I discussed how we could use India's knack for writing rhyming stories, and that was when the idea of the annual Christmas card came about.  Since 2000, we have included a poem (by India) in each of our Christmas cards. First I asked India to do a poem about the younger boys’ hockey exploits, since at that time in our lives we were living and breathing hockey. India and I started to learn to work together. I tell her a story and she asks for more details and I try to remember everything I can, and out comes a poem about it. It is always such a delight to receive the poem that I know she had been working on!

India: 
     If only I had known what Karen and Tamara were plotting!


The boys are at the end of a hockey game

Holiday Heart


What with Gretsky and Orr and Hull
hockey has never been dull
But true fans would also be wise
to note players of much smaller size,
who, less versed in hockey’s rough art,
play instead with abundance of heart.

Michael Mariscal played for the green
last season – his big brother’s team,
but while Ricky had most of the skill, 
younger Michael yet played with a will.
To each game he came with a smile
untroubled by technique, or style,
eager, but equally content,
to be placed on the line or the bench.
All season, with admirable pluck
in pursuit of the elusive puck,
his stick work considerably choppy,
his ankles endearingly floppy,
he muddled his way through each game, 
but the outcome was always the same.
If he shot for the goal, he missed,
nor did he make an assist.

But one game, towards the end of that season,
came a play that provides this poem’s reason.

Picture now, in the stands, Mom and Dad,
(exhausted, holding one extra pad,
left over after Michael and Ricky
each seemed to be padded quite thickly),
by their side was Billy, quite content,
to sit still until his popcorn was spent.
And little did any of them think
that this time at the ice hockey rink
would break the familiar cycle
for one little player named Michael.

Directing your attention floorward,
on the ice was Michael, playing forward;
so far in the game, he’d done naught,
and I’m sure that he never thought,
as he fondly watched Ricky move, 
That his own luck was set to improve.

Now the puck came to Michael’s stick
and he made a decision quick-
so it seemed – that without even blinking
before he had much time for thinking,
he shot, through an unguarded hole
and scored (oh my lord) his first goal!!

Billy’s popcorn flew up in the air
Michael’s goal touched everyone there,
You heard war whoops and whistles and cheers
as if there’d been no goal of years,
as if, out there on the ice
some ‘miracle of rare device’
had transpired, with Michael its cause,
the focus of all the applause,
and Michael knew then hockey’s glory
but that’s not the end of our story.

One day, some months after that goal,
a (small) secret taking its toll,
Michael felt the need to confess
and his secret was – can you guess?

As he told it to Mom on that day,
he felt funny taking credit for that play:
His goal had been by mistake,
it was not one he’d meant to make.
He’d been trying to pass the puck
to Ricky, and simply by luck,
the puck his intentions ignored,
and, somehow or other, he’d scored!
Now that is the end of this tale, 
That came in your holiday mail,
But remember that the only true art

Is to play with an abundance of heart.